You and I
Drifting, sailing
Toward the unknown
An ever-changing horizon
Beckons, sweetly
Above us
Sky of black
With glittering stars
Diamonds
A silvery moon
The music of the
Spheres
Lulls us into slumber
What dreams come
On this gentle sea
A faint glow
In the distance
Growing larger, brighter
The bountiful sun
Rises!
Interesting piece of poetry. Love the articulation and the language used. Hope to see more from you. Have hope, write on! 😊😊😊
Thank you so much for those kind words, zeckrombryan!
You are welcome. 😊
Conjures up fear in me. As I get older, and my anxiety increases, the thought of being lost is terrifying. The poem succeeds in evoking feelings, and for that is a huge success!
I had no idea that this would invoke a sense of fear. I think if you read the last stanza, you will see that the feeling of being lost is transmuted into Joy, as the sun rises, as it always does.
I agree with you. But with the anxiety I suffer with daily, the thought of being lost is scary.
Love this !
Thank you!
After re-reading, it brings peace, calm, and stillness
Ah to be sailing!
Thanks for the comment, Milly! 💖
🙂 🙂