under a purple sky
dotted with silver stars
i strolled along a beach
of crystals, small and bright
so peaceful, with each step
like tears, my sorrows fell
there was no past, future
only glorious now!
and then i came to know
that i was, in spirit
far greater than this shell
beautiful, eternal
The second verse is upbeat, personal, and calming. With that in mind, it has a positive effect and a subtle invitation to let go of the worries and concerns and just be. Well done!
Thank you Jay – I appreciate your feedback and kind words!